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Post by orangekit on Feb 7, 2010 13:29:07 GMT -6
Furcadia Player Name:Orangekit
Character Name:Orangekit
Age:2 years old
Gender:Female
Breed:Gray wolf
Mate/Courting:none
Offspring:Zaciniai,Akiza,Tiny Paws,wolf.
Appearance:http://www.freewebs.com/icewarriors123/white-wolf.jpg
Reason for Joining:I'am looking for a pack to be in.It's kinda lonely because i don't have a mate but i have adopted pups.
Preferred Rank:Den mother
rp sample:Orangekit washed her pups in the den.She nudged all her pups to her belly to sleep.She watched them sleep.She wondered in her head."I am sure that these pups will grow up to be wonderful wolves.And maybe i will get a mate someday or tommorow."She yawned and put her head on her pups and fell asleep.Suddenly five wolves appeared and started swinging there paws at her.She backed away a couple of times to avoid injuries.The only thing she thought of was the safety of her vunlnerable pups. Contactable Alts: just this one
Anything else?: the reason i stopped right there in my pr because i wasn'it sure of what those wolves were going to do they could have been mean or kind.
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Post by Antipathy on Feb 7, 2010 21:54:57 GMT -6
You didn't list your adopted pups in your Offspring. Why? Also, your roleplay example is...basically awful. You need a LOT of work and a few lessons in English. For now, I'm going to have to say:
[glow=red,2,300]Rejected[/glow]
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Post by zaciniai on Feb 8, 2010 11:45:51 GMT -6
Mom You need to work on your RP,but mine was really no better! Anyway if you read this I'd like to ask you this:Can you come online?im boored..
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