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Post by Death by Blood on Feb 13, 2010 19:51:59 GMT -6
Furcadia Player Name:Death or Blood
Character Name:Death by Blood
Age: 1 1/2
Gender: Female
Breed: Mixed breed
Mate/Courting: none
Offspring: none
Appearance [pictures and/or weblinks are accepted]: none
Reason for Joining: in need. slow and lonely.
Preferred Rank: hunter
Example of RP: Covering herself from the cold blizzarding winds of Alaska, the white and red fae glanced around once more, eventually noticing the dark den that looked warm. Slowly, she moved towards it until she could barely crawl into it. But what she saw within it mad her stop. It was the den of a pack of wolves. "Sorry, didn't mean to intruded. I'll leave now," she whispered, slowly turning away and heading back into the blizzard, knowing that wolves were territorial and strict over it.
Contactable Alts: none
Anything else?: no
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Secu
Unranked
Posts: 49
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Post by Secu on Feb 13, 2010 19:54:07 GMT -6
well.... it's been done poorly... well have to see what hal and korth say
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Post by Korth on Feb 14, 2010 15:29:37 GMT -6
-shrugs-
The RP sample is pretty good grammar wise.
A little practice wouldn't go astray but still.
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Post by Korth on Feb 14, 2010 15:37:10 GMT -6
Yes, that was me. 030
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Post by Antipathy on Feb 14, 2010 18:00:26 GMT -6
REJECTED due to character forming own pack. However, she may apply for alliance.
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